Kia Ora Te, Chris here, I really like how you have planned this piece of work and how it is well explained. I also like the title page because it hooks me in and makes me want to read about your catapult. Approximately how long did it take to make an awesome catapult with the sticks and rubber bands? Maybe sometime soon you can check for mistakes but rather than that this post is great.
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Te, Chris here, I really like how you have planned this piece of work and how it is well explained. I also like the title page because it hooks me in and makes me want to read about your catapult. Approximately how long did it take to make an awesome catapult with the sticks and rubber bands? Maybe sometime soon you can check for mistakes but rather than that this post is great.
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